Sunday, March 26, 2006

Plutonic Passion

Ode 2 Fallen Angel

My best friend, sexy lekta le fem fatal, my nigga,
my girl, my partna, my gal, how did I get to this point;
PLEASE SEND ME TO MY WOMB!

Damn, I want to *uck, but respect what we have, what we had...

What the Hell am I doing holding your hand?
Why am I removing your pants?
Why are you calling my name aloud?

Your fertile soil plowed, we vowed to never pass the line,
pass me the bottle of wine, pass me your mind, body and soul
quickly like you used to do before our curiosity turned your
now sunspot hot shoulders over, penetration…

Remember when they were cold like your eyes whenever you tell me,
"Nigga Please"!

Now you ask, "Please take me, place yourself deep within,
never to exit"!

Damn, our friendship is the *hit, especially the benefits.

When you and your man get finished, call me,
I want to pull your hair again…

5 Comments:

Blogger Angel said...

Thank you for the touching tribute...What can I say? Our relationship is enigmatic to say the least. So many things to say, never the right avenue to say them...

Monday, March 27, 2006 at 1:01:00 AM CST  
Blogger MagicalSis said...

very erotic.
to cross the line or not cross the line.
it will never be the same....
unfortunately, takes an amazing (not oft found) soul to not attempt to POSSESS the one that they are banging.(even if in some subtle, hidden ways)
hmmmmmmmmmm
nice piece.

Monday, March 27, 2006 at 9:14:00 AM CST  
Blogger Tobey A. Anderson said...

good expression of lust/desire/passion without it turning into a grinding cliche. any particular reason for the edits (*hit, for example)? just being polite? keepin it pg?

just curious, i like the curse words too, they have a beauty all their own.

Monday, March 27, 2006 at 12:10:00 PM CST  
Blogger Shelle said...

my my my, and she does say she likes her locs pulled!
very erotic
sometimes the friend/lover line is a dangerous thing to cross.

Monday, March 27, 2006 at 3:20:00 PM CST  
Blogger CousinSarah said...

Whoa.

That is all.

Monday, March 27, 2006 at 10:19:00 PM CST  

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