Monday, March 27, 2006

Walking Backwards

The Path I Tread

I have spent all of my life leading emotion to the promised land,
to places where hands are used to love and kill,
places where, due to danger, running was the option and I
was ready, swift, steady.

I have spent all of my existence jumping upward toward hoops,
both imagined and real, pacing myself while approaching surreal,
stressful utopias, crossing burning sands for frivolous reasons,
but important to the point where the journey needed enduring.

I have spent all of my time carrying the burdens of
she who lacked gratitude, overtly rude to the point where
I wanted to stop, wanted to quit allowing her support
while standing on pedestals which men had wrongly placed her, until...

Entering hot water, not scalding,
air smelling of potpourri, subtle, not overpowering
Loofah, soft as buckets of freshly picked rose petals
Warm towels wiping away traces of cinnamon bubble bath
Hands strong, massaging, erasing the pain of miles tread.

Cool peach juice surrounds me,
the bowl deep as Grand Canyon, infinite
His mouth wet, inviting, his tongue, gentle
Suction, licking, kissing; bliss – oral pedicure…

I now appreciate being the oxen charged with towing
a beautiful woman, who am I?

Orgasmic Feet!!!

4 Comments:

Blogger Angel said...

SHUT THE HELL UP!!!! This piece is awesome! Might need to type this up and have it posted at every place or parlor that does pedicures. As a person who loves to have her toes sucked, I can relate to that feeling that these feet are experiencing. Let me tell you--it is indeed orgasmic!!!!

Monday, March 27, 2006 at 2:42:00 PM CST  
Blogger CousinSarah said...

I ditto Angel!!

to places where hands are used to love and kill,

I love this line...has so much illusionary duplicity.

Monday, March 27, 2006 at 10:17:00 PM CST  
Blogger Angel said...

I keep re-reading this piece...and finding something new that makes me smile each time. Damn damn damn--those are some lucky feet!

Wednesday, March 29, 2006 at 12:36:00 PM CST  
Blogger Nikki Smith said...

"I have spent all of my life leading emotion to the promised land, to places where hands are used to love and kill,
places where, due to danger, running was the option and I
was ready, swift, steady."
I like this lot. It holds so much truth. p.s. thks for the comment on my page not to long ago. I admire the way u write. =-)

Thursday, March 30, 2006 at 3:15:00 PM CST  

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