Soul Ties
The Last Step
These are the last words I said to my wife before
asking her on our first date, "if you allow, I'll
take you to a place far away from yourself,
a place so good you'll want to become someone
else."
She agreed, so I changed her last name.
What a shame, ever since then,
I've been wishing,
she said no...
These are the last words I said to my wife before
asking her on our first date, "if you allow, I'll
take you to a place far away from yourself,
a place so good you'll want to become someone
else."
She agreed, so I changed her last name.
What a shame, ever since then,
I've been wishing,
she said no...
posted by SLUMP FACADE at 4:41:00 PM
Dang man. I hope that isnt true. If so, ya'll got some talkin to do. It is so painful to love someone you are no longer in love with. Just in case this is real, I will send some love and prayer your way brotha.
i know all too well the power of a soul tie B. as we've discussed many times, loving someone and being in love with someone are two very different things. all i ever want is for the people that i love to be happy and if this means me being the unhappy one, so be it.
Wow, that is sad. Sometimes you can renew your relationships with others. A vow and a commitment are heavy things. Perhaps you are looking to that marriage to fullfill something that it cannot, which means you look inward to see what you can do differently.
Don't be a dog, please please please!!!
Tragically beautiful....
thir13teen....
oh can i add you to my list...
Great little sniplet, be true or fabricated. The irony is not lost on me. ..
I jumped all over it didn't I? Didn't realize it was not a reality poem :)
Sorry Slump, forgive me?
alot of folk suffer from that same regret, brotha...great piece
i like this piece... although i have to admitt, it may not be funny but i did laugh... sorry. As short as it was... it had great meaning.
thanks... i added you.
thir13teen
are you sad she said no because she is not the woman for you, or sad because you cannot live up to the expectations of taking her beyond....
either way, i feel ya...
it was beautifully written but i do hope it really isn't that way, be blessed and stay blessed