Monday, May 22, 2006

Life Trap

Side Swipe

Penned against the steering wheel,
upside down, God’s will?
smelling gasoline racing toward flames,
grilled human fillet, flesh fricassee,
time wanes,
overwhelming pains indicate bone breakage,
calling Jesus name in vain,
heat intensifies,
thankful of tears expelling
wet eyes dampening engulfed clothes,
fire hose too far away,
reminiscing childhood questions of,
“can I go out to play,”
tight space, smaller
screaming, holler,
panic, delirious realized fears,
Angels whispering in ears, “let go,”
exhale, smoke filled lungs full,
jaws of life pull limp puppet from carnage,
unfortunately, alcoholic driver causing life losses
remains unscathed seated in police conclave
discussing breathalyzer results…

…alternative ending…
no more hurt,
no more discretions,
seat belts often make fine sources of protection…

3 Comments:

Blogger MagicalSis said...

well now....this one was quite the ad for M.A.D.D.

Monday, May 22, 2006 at 8:50:00 PM CST  
Blogger Shelle said...

very intense imagery, good one.

Tuesday, May 23, 2006 at 11:52:00 AM CST  
Blogger Daily Piglet said...

Very well done, it totally brought me to the movie "Crash".

Very, very well done.

Tuesday, May 23, 2006 at 8:26:00 PM CST  

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