Dear Diary
Final Entry
Today is a good day to die,
depart the earth, enter the sky,
exhale, waiting to enter the light,
inhale, non-gravitational pull, soul in flight,
wonder if God welcomes with open arms,
peaceful journey, calm,
eyes open, eyes closed,
soul freedom, soul glow,
wonder if Hell ever freezes over,
greetings Jehovah,
“sorry for the suicide,
I could no longer try,”
His reply… Satan awaits…
Today is a good day to die,
depart the earth, enter the sky,
exhale, waiting to enter the light,
inhale, non-gravitational pull, soul in flight,
wonder if God welcomes with open arms,
peaceful journey, calm,
eyes open, eyes closed,
soul freedom, soul glow,
wonder if Hell ever freezes over,
greetings Jehovah,
“sorry for the suicide,
I could no longer try,”
His reply… Satan awaits…
posted by SLUMP FACADE at 1:18:00 PM
i continue to love the imagery your pieces convey...hate the picture that this one is painting though...
i'm with fallen angel. your skillful imagery cannot be surpassed.
loving the message this one tells.
;o)
thir13teen
you make even the darkest day poetic art
its great you put God's name out there, a lot of folks don't have clue.
I really dig this poem, this is exactly how a friend of mine explained her feeling of ending her life. Crucial.
Very well done. This is one of those that makes you want to turn the page and read more.
yea, what Piglet said.....
Really though, maybe Satan is having to re-do all that shit over that ya didn't GO THROUGH the first time.
wow...you paint a great picture of death here...I like it...quite morbid, but it's about death...so it's great.
you really have a gift of emotive writing...people need that...
uh? where are you? got to get my reading on....
i'm with 13....please add water to the soil...
That's some good writing.