Sinners Sanctum
Sitting Still in Chaos (1st Haiku)
Finally I ask
Looking up into the sky
Where are you my God?
Why do you not see
Your servant is in deep pain
Please extend your hand
I need you to know
Evil surrounds my soul now
See a takeover?
Do not forsake me
Heaven is my only home
Hell holds no high throne
Earthly time confines
Flesh to a bound existence
Caught in purgatory
Roaming, looking, dead
Seeking a eternal life
Wanting to soar high
Live with the angels
Die at the feet of Demons
Conquer all my fears
Defeat enemies!
Break their necks, bend their bodies
Destroy their flesh Lord!
Have them kneel now
GodMake them pay for hurting me
This sinner needs you…
Finally I ask
Looking up into the sky
Where are you my God?
Why do you not see
Your servant is in deep pain
Please extend your hand
I need you to know
Evil surrounds my soul now
See a takeover?
Do not forsake me
Heaven is my only home
Hell holds no high throne
Earthly time confines
Flesh to a bound existence
Caught in purgatory
Roaming, looking, dead
Seeking a eternal life
Wanting to soar high
Live with the angels
Die at the feet of Demons
Conquer all my fears
Defeat enemies!
Break their necks, bend their bodies
Destroy their flesh Lord!
Have them kneel now
GodMake them pay for hurting me
This sinner needs you…
posted by SLUMP FACADE at 9:15:00 AM
Live with the angels
Die at the feet of Demons
Conquer all my fears
My favorite.
This is nice...longing, hope and pain.
Yes, I know this struggle, B.
My relationship with G is illusive only b/c I go away.
Flesh and the world divert my eyes and everytime I come back suffering.
But...I have to always return b/c the alternative is inner stagnation or death.
Keep up the good trek.
It is worth it.
well done, luv. i especially love
Live with the angels
Die at the feet of Demons
Conquer all my fears
strong with the imagery and still eloquent.
i am proud of you.
your first haiku and you killed it.
hope you write some more...
:)
i like the concept of this, we all feel this at some point.
good ones... I am not one for haikus... well, actually, never tried them before..
thir13teen
i like these, cause each can and do stand on their own.
my fav is live w/the angels...
I like this piece. I know this struggle. Sometimes we are so focused on the pain that we are experiencing that we fail to realize that God is right there.
This is a really good poem. I know where you are coming from and I am glad that I game across your work. Keep it coming