Jealous Extremes
Realization (XL)
Standing above, peering below,
she gleefully watches his descent into non-existence,
a flask she filled with poison just moments
before lay on the floor, spilled,
slowly seeping, similar to life from his body,
infidelity chickens coming home to roost,
no definite proof needed, indeed it was evident
she’s paid close attention to the obvious clues…
…noticeably breathing in agony he summoned strength, “why?”
Not a tear in her eye, responding, “because you deserve to die!”
This piece will be in the book, "Capturing Sunrays in a Glass Jar",
which is why it appears incomplete in this post...
Standing above, peering below,
she gleefully watches his descent into non-existence,
a flask she filled with poison just moments
before lay on the floor, spilled,
slowly seeping, similar to life from his body,
infidelity chickens coming home to roost,
no definite proof needed, indeed it was evident
she’s paid close attention to the obvious clues…
…noticeably breathing in agony he summoned strength, “why?”
Not a tear in her eye, responding, “because you deserve to die!”
This piece will be in the book, "Capturing Sunrays in a Glass Jar",
which is why it appears incomplete in this post...
Wow, I guess that is ironic. Interesting piece.
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"no definite proof needed, indeed it was evident
she’s paid close attention to the obvious clues…"
Dangerous position...Dangerous indeed. What we often feel is our "proof" is the undoing of us. I got burned by it just this week and had to apologize and play nice for a few days.
MORE PLEASE! :-)
Hmm more like the "Slump" I'm used to....more please
hmmm yeah i like...i'm sure there is a slump twist to it, so i cannot wait to read the rest.
Now we are cooking! This works wonderfully. Excellent teaser!
BTW, my camera and my eyes are at your service. I am honored.
very nice as usual....and i love the title of your book!
…noticeably breathing in agony he summoned strength, “why?”
Not a tear in her eye, responding, “because you deserve to die!”
Makes me really want to read more. I felt the entire thing going down. You got some kinda skills man!
Ouch! ...the 'ole poison trick eh??
"a flask she filled with poison just moments
before lay on the floor, spilled,
slowly seeping, similar to life from his body,"
I like~ I like.
I also adore the title.
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!! :-D
Can't wait for the book!
When does the book drop?
Can't wait for the book, CONGRATS!! I want an autograph copy so send me the price and where to mail you a money order :)
Your fanatic fan
Lyrically yours
Yeah, I'm hanging waiting for the rest.... Very well done and um yeah, what's up with "to be continued..." you are a tease!
And I agree with what someone else wrote about "this being the Slump I am used to".... Fans don't like it when you change on us too well :)
dark and eerie...