Swallow
The Speculation (XLI)
Being inside your mouth has become second nature like breathing,
feelings deepening with each entry, wet,
our interactions etched in the stone of your memory,
certainly,
I’ve entered plenty of women, but only you’ve cried,
acted as if you’d died,
please open as wide as you can…
I’d like “this” time to be less painful than the last,
less chocking, less smoking, less hoping its over fast,
not to sound crass, but hearing your moaning is exciting,
though the process is not necessarily inviting
it gives “us” meaning,
without me your being is unfulfilled…
Who am I?
The dentist's drill used to make your
Million dollar smile a reality…
Being inside your mouth has become second nature like breathing,
feelings deepening with each entry, wet,
our interactions etched in the stone of your memory,
certainly,
I’ve entered plenty of women, but only you’ve cried,
acted as if you’d died,
please open as wide as you can…
I’d like “this” time to be less painful than the last,
less chocking, less smoking, less hoping its over fast,
not to sound crass, but hearing your moaning is exciting,
though the process is not necessarily inviting
it gives “us” meaning,
without me your being is unfulfilled…
Who am I?
The dentist's drill used to make your
Million dollar smile a reality…
posted by SLUMP FACADE at 9:56:00 PM
wow. what i wouldn't give to live inside your mind for jus a few fleeting moments!!
who knew that a visit to the dentist could be made to sound so erotic? from now on when i see dr. campbell i'll think of this peace and maybe our interaction won't seem so bad? nice, poet.
Peace...
lol..never as it seems...good one
OMG, I bow to thee for these purified words:
Being inside your mouth has become second nature like breathing,
feelings deepening with each entry, wet,
our interactions etched in the stone of your memory,
certainly,
I’ve entered plenty of women, but only you’ve cried,
acted as if you’d died,
please open as wide as you can…
This piece is hot and made me hot!
You are the master of innuendo. I knew this from the first piece of yours I read all those months ago. But more than that, you are one of the very few who causes me to suffer from occasional bouts of envy. You wield a Montblanc the way a Samurai wields a katana! Receive my sincerest expressions of praise.
Damn you!
i love it! i love it! i love it!
Very nice Slump, this was successful at pulling me in.....
Million Dollar smile :)
Ok this was HOTT!!! but let me explain why. It is very difficult to take something so dreaded, something so many seek to avoid and turn it into something that sounds so sexy. It's funny, as I was reading (and I didn't jump ahead) I knew what I wanted it to be about (the x-rated) but at the same time I knew exactly what it was about and that made reading it even more exciting.
Slump you have an awesome way with words...the way your mind works is amazing. Keep it up man, I really am enjoying your work more and more with every new piece!!!
What can I say that I haven't already told you?
You have a beautiful way with words. Your mastery of imagery and lyrical style of your poetry is unsurpassed. This is not flattery, my friend. I'm just stating the obvious...
You're such a perv. HMMMM.
I should have seen that coming. Although, I have to admit my perverted mind was let unfulfilled by that poem. Lol.
"Being inside your mouth has become second nature like breathing,
feelings deepening with each entry, wet,
our interactions etched in the stone of your memory,
certainly..."
is it bad that this part reminds me of a kiss i've shared with someone...??? probably so huh?especially considering this piece is about going to the dentist!!
Okay.....I am so late on this post. You had me leaning into my computer screen breathing all hard. You got me!