Wednesday, April 04, 2007

Love Beautiful

“I’m going to file for divorce,”
were the last words he thought,
prior to opening the door,
before feeling the gun fire roar,
sounding like crowd cheers after goals scored,
his infidelity made her heart soar,
to new lows,
made her heart sore,
to new pains,
similar to those experienced by her brains,
moments after she pulled the trigger for the
second time, just before,
“I’m going to love him to death,”
were the first words she thought after
finding a love letter to her husband,
signed by her twin sister, reading,
“I love you more,
glad Melissa will never know.”

7 Comments:

Blogger Miz JJ said...

Damn. That is crazy. It made me wonder if it were an identical twin. The level of betrayal I think would be much greater I would imagine. Interesting...it made me think.

Wednesday, April 4, 2007 at 12:19:00 PM CST  
Blogger Shelle said...

damn! that is crazy...but possible

Wednesday, April 4, 2007 at 1:37:00 PM CST  
Blogger Little Brown Girl said...

I'd kill her stankin azz too!!!

How do you think of this stuff...your mind is amazing!!

Wednesday, April 4, 2007 at 3:02:00 PM CST  
Blogger Isha said...

Wow...three pieces in three days...smoke must be coming out of your ears!

Good piece.

Wednesday, April 4, 2007 at 5:12:00 PM CST  
Blogger Shai said...

Powerful piece!

Happy National Poetry Month!

Wednesday, April 4, 2007 at 7:55:00 PM CST  
Blogger layne bowden said...

see what i mean?

male poets are crazee as hell!! oops, ummm, what i had meant to say was, they're eccentric. (lol)

great write, sir.

peace!

Thursday, April 5, 2007 at 6:38:00 PM CST  
Blogger piglet said...

nice poem, i love the title and the way it works with the poem.

Thursday, April 5, 2007 at 10:12:00 PM CST  

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