Saturday, March 10, 2007

Just a Girl @ the End of the Day...

Watching flowers fall from the Heavens pales in
comparison to her beauty,
truly a Goddess among women,
her mind is as fine a Persian silk linen,
feminine bliss packaged in dark chocolate wrappings,
both tempting, edible, incredible are her ways,
to gaze directly into her love would age the viewer
due to the radiance,
leaving even the Angels jealous,
unselfishness is her mantra,
being in her presence feels good as Karma working to
your advantage,
her canvass is filled with curves similar to rolling hills,
plentiful, remarkable, magnificent,
exquisite is her thought process,
temptress, womanly tempest leaving masculine
suitors wet, sweating from the pressure mounting from
desires caused by wishing to drink from her fountain,
swallow her breath, chase her flesh into hidden places
where no men have journeyed, but all have dreamt about,
leaving them wishing for a position of clout in an effort
to garner her attention,
if only for fleeting moments,
but never for the sake of setting appointments without meaning,
if only to bask in her conversation briefly,
leaving "hello", "good-bye" exchanges eternal,
her love immortal due to its everlasting nature,
to know her is scripture, forever,
for to hold her is pleasure even if it is limited to accidentally
touching hands when exiting though the same door,
she represents the core of effervescence,
hers is a love of essence, similar to volcanic crevices;
extremely hot...

My lips still burn ablaze from our first, last kiss...

8 Comments:

Blogger Shelle said...

dang b, this is...well simply beautiful. the imagery is great. i can't even decide which line or part i like best, 'cause the whole thing is my fav. smile. and i think one of your best.

Sunday, March 11, 2007 at 8:23:00 PM CST  
Blogger Tenacious said...

Beautiful slump...one of ur best yet

Monday, March 12, 2007 at 10:55:00 AM CST  
Blogger Miz JJ said...

That is quite the pedestal you have built.

Monday, March 12, 2007 at 11:54:00 AM CST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow, slump! that's very nice!

Monday, March 12, 2007 at 6:21:00 PM CST  
Blogger Gemini Girl aka GG said...

wow...is all I can say...I love all the lines...I can see it all in my head...
fav line:
leaving masculine
suitors wet, sweating from the pressure mounting from
desires caused by wishing to drink from her fountain,
wow....I *heart* u in my dreams!

Tuesday, March 13, 2007 at 8:41:00 AM CST  
Blogger Gemini Girl aka GG said...

so have u met this girl? if so did u know it or did u realize it when it was too late? and if you meet her next month will you tell her that you are smitten or will you keep all your feelings inside??

Tuesday, March 13, 2007 at 3:42:00 PM CST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

thank you so much for my tribute, have we met?

Sunday, March 18, 2007 at 2:53:00 AM CST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Brach's Sundaes Neapolitan Coconut, thats what they're called. Bought some the other day.

Monday, March 19, 2007 at 12:46:00 PM CST  

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