Monday, August 14, 2006

"X" Does Not = "10"

Ode To Doriea

He wanted a woman to challenge him,
not just fuck his brains out,
for he needed those to think,
which is what she rarely did,
hence, her title, his "X",
the only perfect 10 he ever dated...

10 Comments:

Blogger Angel said...

uh... maybe i'm just exhausted from this past week, but i dont get it...? will have to read it again later...

Monday, August 14, 2006 at 3:02:00 PM CST  
Blogger Angel said...

so was she a perfect 10 because she was his ex or because she rarely thought?

Monday, August 14, 2006 at 5:03:00 PM CST  
Blogger Xave said...

Wow, this little one here is deep. Sounds like you know my ex-wife Alice (not her real name) I may write a response from her point of view. Thanks for the inspiration!

Monday, August 14, 2006 at 5:41:00 PM CST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice! I like it!

Monday, August 14, 2006 at 9:01:00 PM CST  
Blogger MagicalSis said...

huh?

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 at 12:05:00 AM CST  
Blogger nikki said...

i'm feeling this one, slump.

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 at 4:43:00 PM CST  
Blogger SLUMP FACADE said...

@Fallen, she was a perfect 10 because she desired/tried to please him in every way, except the way I (oops) needed her to please me most; mentally...

@jmeped, she was extremely HOT! Body was beyond average, but not perfect. Wasn't her looks, it was her wanting/needing to put a smile on my face which made her my most delightful experience; unfortunately, for her, the fast came in an accelerated manner;(

Thursday, August 17, 2006 at 4:28:00 PM CST  
Blogger Chance said...

This is interesting...Not really sure if I get it though.

Tuesday, August 22, 2006 at 4:59:00 AM CST  
Blogger my coffee is always said...

i really like the use of the roman numeral 10, as opposed to spelling "ex". you're one sly man...

Wednesday, August 23, 2006 at 12:24:00 PM CST  
Blogger Miz JJ said...

I like this one. It's tight. Thanks for visiting my spot.

Wednesday, August 23, 2006 at 12:58:00 PM CST  

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