Thursday, October 19, 2006

Intimate Continuation II

The Beginning of Forever

Tears are forming,
alarming are "your" inactions,
leaving my pregnant heart contracting,
waiting to give birth to a
perfect love made by you,
for you...

…created during thoughtful verbal interactions,
Summation-like, forcing utter concentration levels
into submission, our efforts moving beyond reaching fruition,
traveling light-years past butterfly stomach tension,
journeying past puppy love apprehensions,
headed deep into reality suspension where only
“we” occupy “our” time, space, existence…

…intimate showers of kisses dance across your flesh
like masculine tempest leaving wetness in-depth,
enough to fill countless wine glasses leaving them a bit
more than half-full, which is what I was until you said,
“Hello,” for the first time, had me there, not like
Jerry Maguire, but like Thru the Fire,
beyond the limits, beyond the walls,
both brick and vaginal alike,
making the falling “in” like as breathless as falling from heights
without a parachute,
not Fallin’ like Alicia Keys tributes,
not falling “in” like eatable journeys leading to Fallopian rights of passage,
not falling “in” like rabbits disappearing in hats of black magic,
falling “in” like it feels like millennium passes
during one minute phone conversations,
falling “in” like it feels like hibernation when sleeping after
I know you’ve made it home out of harms way,
falling “in” deep enough to say,
I Want You, not like Marvin Gaye,
but like only I can…

…I love you,”

6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow...I feel it.

Not like Marvin Gaye, but like only you can...who can ask for anything more than that?

~Trish

Thursday, October 19, 2006 at 8:34:00 AM CST  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

That's some deep ish man. Guess she had you like Usher - Caught Up. Even though it seems like didn't work out, take solace in knowing that she still had an effect and possessed the stuff that affected your accuities in such a profound manner. It shows that "in" is transitory and can't be possessed, but shared.

Nice piece!!!

Thursday, October 19, 2006 at 10:13:00 AM CST  
Blogger layne bowden said...

these lines are hot:

our efforts moving beyond reaching fruition, traveling light-years past butterfly stomach tension, journeying past puppy love apprehensions, headed deep into reality suspension where only “we” occupy “our” time, space, existence…

and these too

making the falling “in” like as breathless as falling from heights without a parachute

nice write, poet! very nice.

Peace! Today, Be... beautiful!

Thursday, October 19, 2006 at 5:21:00 PM CST  
Blogger Intelfetish said...

Hey BIG boi, I see you have been busy doing you -- guess what, I'm back in the country, leave of absence is over so its time to get back all in your business...

Yes, I love it, the piece that is...

Friday, October 20, 2006 at 11:43:00 AM CST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

One word: beautiful.

Friday, October 20, 2006 at 9:23:00 PM CST  
Blogger Tenacious said...

I love it :-)

Saturday, October 21, 2006 at 1:23:00 PM CST  

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