Intimate Continuation
The Beginning of Forever
Tears are forming,
alarming are "your" inactions,
leaving my pregnant heart contracting,
waiting to give birth to a
perfect love made by you,
for you...
The aforementioned brief was inspired
by Ms. Jus Butterfli's recent post.
"Interlude #4: Soul Wide Shut (for you)"
These are the words which meant the most:
"Conceptualizing a touch
so intense that it
brands,
So extreme, glass would be
transposed to its
original form of sand and
begin slipping thru fingertips
similar to my soul..."
Tears are forming,
alarming are "your" inactions,
leaving my pregnant heart contracting,
waiting to give birth to a
perfect love made by you,
for you...
The aforementioned brief was inspired
by Ms. Jus Butterfli's recent post.
"Interlude #4: Soul Wide Shut (for you)"
These are the words which meant the most:
"Conceptualizing a touch
so intense that it
brands,
So extreme, glass would be
transposed to its
original form of sand and
begin slipping thru fingertips
similar to my soul..."
posted by SLUMP FACADE at 2:15:00 PM
Hey you! Thanks for the "shout-out". I love it when a poet I admire finds something they can truly appreciate in my words! It's a humbling experience! I'm happy I could inspire you. Now all you gotta do is work on making that "brief" into a full length poem! Is that asking too much? (LOL)
Peace!
I likes I likes...
this is BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love it...and conceptualizing is my new word for the day. i love the way it rolls off my tongue. thanks!
Your piece, as they always are, is beautiful! I love your writing, Slump. You know that!
And I love Jus.B.Fli's piece as well. We have a talented community in which we reside.
Beautiful and passionate. Jus.b.fli is the girl. I'm glad she inspired you to write this, I love it.