Southern Sensuality…
...This is a dedication...
She was the only woman he never met who stole his heart completely…
…the only woman he’d swore to embrace equally,
…the only woman he’d imagined enjoying faithfully,
…the only woman he’d admitted made him feel free,
She was the only woman he never met who he was devoted to pleasing…
…the only woman he’d vowed to approach with complete reason,
…the only woman he’d dreamt of never leaving…
…the only woman he’d prayed would be in his life for more than a season,
She was the only woman he never met who made him feel as a King…
…the only woman he’d want to share his total being,
…the only woman he’d regret not seeing,
…the only woman he’d go from mildly like to desperately needing…
She was the only woman he never met who used her vocal chords to ultimately make him fall in love again for the first time, though from the beginning to date has only been five days in his mind, its been an eternity; which leaves him wondering, does she feel the same?
She was the only woman he never met who stole his heart completely…
…the only woman he’d swore to embrace equally,
…the only woman he’d imagined enjoying faithfully,
…the only woman he’d admitted made him feel free,
She was the only woman he never met who he was devoted to pleasing…
…the only woman he’d vowed to approach with complete reason,
…the only woman he’d dreamt of never leaving…
…the only woman he’d prayed would be in his life for more than a season,
She was the only woman he never met who made him feel as a King…
…the only woman he’d want to share his total being,
…the only woman he’d regret not seeing,
…the only woman he’d go from mildly like to desperately needing…
She was the only woman he never met who used her vocal chords to ultimately make him fall in love again for the first time, though from the beginning to date has only been five days in his mind, its been an eternity; which leaves him wondering, does she feel the same?
posted by SLUMP FACADE at 2:10:00 PM
Damn, Slump. This post is like you tivo'd my life and made it poetic. I feel this piece on so many levels, yo! Great writing.
I was sitting here trying to pick my favorite verse... or line... or somethin', then I realized I love the entire peace!
These are beautiful emotional sentiments all wrapped up in poetic magnificence! Take a bow poet... "She" is a lucky woman! But that last line leaves the reader wondering if she even knows?
Peace! Today, Be... wide open!
She was the only woman he never met who made him feel as a King…
…the only woman he’d want to share his total being,
…the only woman he’d regret not seeing,
…the only woman he’d go from mildly like to desperately needing…
this is my favorite part. desperately needing is an overwhelming emotion for me. having blocked my soul from loving for so long. its an emotion finaly welcome in my own life. great write!
Awesome, awseome piece! WOW!
you continue to amaze me with your words. Never stop writing! OK?
She was the only woman he never met who made him feel as a King…
…the only woman he’d want to share his total being,
…the only woman he’d regret not seeing,
…the only woman he’d go from mildly like to desperately needing…
loved this part...
I want to be this woman to a man.
this is as intoxicating as it is tragic.
good one b.
Speechless! This is an awesome piece. Keep on keeping on my brutha.