Thursday, September 14, 2006

Child-like Explorations

Part I of III
(Initially Posted 03.26.06)

Her black hair, stained fire engine red,
luke-warm blood pouring from her neck
like an erupting hydrant on a hot Summer day.

She'd been lying, lifeless, Christ less for three hours.

Her slowly ascending soul was angered at the fact it
couldn't tell anyone of the occurrence, disturbance
to her body, violation to her flesh,
the humiliation of being gullible, knowing she
could have prevented the situation, could she?

Her white Power Puff Girl panties, torn from the
back by his brutal entry, simply cut to the chase;
only lasted minutes and seconds. His entry,
unprotected, so even if she survived the attack
she would have been raped by all the pass along
victims as well. Tortured for days, exposed to a
Hell unimaginable because "he" was her father.

A child, his child, a lamb for the slaughter,
surprisingly still trusting of her role model
even after he had withdrawn himself.
Death had not needed to be the answer to the
question she posed before he decided to kill,
"Daddy, do you also treat mommy this way?"

Her display of curiosity was possibly the first thing
pushing him over the edge, his curiosity was the
second thing pushing him deeper inside her,
only stopping to wipe blood from her anus; he
didn't wish to be reminded of the sin, plus he
had on his favorite pair of trousers.

The interaction lasted a few hours, he had to please
himself at least three times before he slit her throat...

7 Comments:

Blogger Nikki Smith said...

..........DANG. wow, that is a trip. I have to let my other friends read this. The story is horrible but the way it was written is completely opposite. I love it.

Thursday, September 14, 2006 at 1:14:00 PM CST  
Blogger Unknown said...

this is an amazing piece......hurtful, but truly amazing. you write tragedy beautifully.

Thursday, September 14, 2006 at 4:42:00 PM CST  
Blogger Nikki Smith said...

Thanks.... i took the reality part off of the thing i wrote.

Thursday, September 14, 2006 at 5:28:00 PM CST  
Blogger Blu Jewel said...

This piece hurt like hell. My insides twisted and the words gnawed at the very core of me. While you made some beauty of the the cruel act and conveyed your point with emotion, I still couldn't help but visualize and wretch at the thought of someone doing this to his child.

Damn!

Monday, September 18, 2006 at 6:28:00 AM CST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

what inspired you to write this?

Tuesday, September 19, 2006 at 9:53:00 PM CST  
Blogger 4GOTTEN1 said...

I'm not sure what to think...It feels like truth it says this is the real world we live in. It's sick it's sort of twisted it's hard to read to swallow to fathom but it's reality.

Wednesday, September 20, 2006 at 5:05:00 PM CST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The sexual abuse of children is bad enough, but incest??? Though beautifully written, your narative is so much more than that to me.

Sunday, September 24, 2006 at 2:29:00 PM CST  

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